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diff --git a/tt/index.tt b/tt/index.tt @@ -11,30 +11,29 @@ <a href="/retailers.html">retailers</a>.</p> <p> To start, try searching for a product or manufacturer in the - search box at the top right. </p> + search box at the top right.</p> <p> <em>Price</em><b>Chart</b> periodically looks up and saves the prices of products. These prices are converted to charts - where determining which retailer is the best to purchase from is - easy.</p> + where it is easy to determining which retailer is the best to + purchase from.</p> </div> <div class="column"> <h1>Motivation</h1> <p> <em>Price</em><b>Chart</b> is meant to be a consumer - purchasing tool. It is intended to give the consumer insight - into retail pricing which they would not normally have. </p> + purchasing tool. It gives the consumer insight into retail + pricing, which they would not normally have. </p> - <p> A common practice when purchasing something new is <em>price - comparison</em>. A consumer decides on a certain product - they are interested in and then look around for the best deal. - That is what this service does. It automates <em>price - comparisons</em>. </p> + <p> A savvy consumer will conduct price comparisons + between different retailers before making a purchasing decision. + The consumer decides on a certain product they are interested in, + and checks stores in their area for both availability and price. + This service automates the <em>price comparison</em> process. </p> <p> This is important because the price difference between - different retailers for the same product is often hundreds of - dollars if not more. </p> + different retailers can be significant.</p> </div> <div class="column">